Inhaling Blue

Crinkled tissue, stain

the corner of her mouth, blue

color she inhales

Here’s a more abstract haiku. This is the result of a tired, slightly sleep deprived mind. Would love to hear your thoughts and interpretations

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theloyalbritwit says:

September 28, 2017 at 9:35 pm

Did you enjoy writing the haiku, sleepy mind or no? It’s been so terribly long since I’ve written one!

I think one of my most favorite aspects of your poetry writing is your enjambment! I don’t know about you but whenever I write poetry, I am rarely conscious of this. But yours is vey artful! Also, I quite like the simplicity of your diction: it adds an extra spicy element overall.

Well done! Thanks for the share. 😄💙

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