Fiery red invades
the sun freckles his face, hot
burning her to shreds
Hi guys, hope you enjoy this haiku! It was written for Haiku Horizon’s Spot Prompt
I did a slightly more “abstract” take on the prompt. So instead of using the word “spot” as a noun, or even a verb, I decided to incorporate the image of spots. In this case, the freckles on his face are “spots.” Let me know what you think!
Comments, love, and critique are much appreciated ❤
Sonder Stories 
Lovely! I have never tried to write a haiku before – I may give it a go! I admire anyone who can work from a prompt – my mind seems to go blank!
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Yes, if you write one, I’d love to read it!
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Love it!! Thanks for the explanation!! well done as usual Tianyi! ❤❤
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Thank you Lana! really appreciate the support 🙂
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you are most welcome dear 🙂
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Wow lovely writing and intense!
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aw thanks for stopping by 🙂
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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Awesome picture!!!!
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thanks!!!
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