Lonely (haiku #6)

hollow knot wraps heart,

squeeze the breath, lone body

press against cold wall.

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poetryfromtheinkwell says:

April 13, 2019 at 4:37 pm

This is palpable… excellent capture of loneliness

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- Sonderwriter says:
  
  April 14, 2019 at 9:43 am
  
  Thanks 🙂 always thought loneliness would be a harder feeling to depict, but somehow at the right moments when feeling it, it becomes easier to embody into words
  
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  - poetryfromtheinkwell says:
    
    April 14, 2019 at 6:44 pm
    
    You are kindly welcome. I agree with you, some things are more easily described when we are experiencing them.
    
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  - Sonderwriter says:
    
    April 15, 2019 at 11:12 am
    
    Yes definitely. And it’s such a cyclic relationship- because writing can help us synthesize and understand the experience more
    
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  - poetryfromtheinkwell says:
    
    April 15, 2019 at 4:50 pm
    
    Yes, it can.
    
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