She poured a bit too much,
it was a bit too strong,
bitter burned and gagged.
I needed sweet, sweat, i swear
i did this to prove
i make mistakes too,
i am not
a bore
i have walls, torn
it was all i needed. a break
from myself
you
to show that i can be more
than just
enough.
❤ let me know any thoughts about the poem! or anything random, spontaneous that you’ve done to feel a bit more reckless 😉
I like the ambiguity and punch of the first line 🙂
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thanks! appreciate the feedback 😀
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bitter burned and gagged, a great line
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glad u liked it! thanks for stopping by 🙂
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The line, I have walls, torn, is haunting – I can feel the adrenaline of being on that airplane and tasting the unsweet wine!
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Ooh glad it had such a powerful affect for you!
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Such a poignant work.
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really uplifting comment 🙂
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My pleasure dear.
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