Sheer density of the humid air left her gasping.
For quite some time, she had felt confined by the hollow spaces, pestered with incoherent thoughts, drained by emotions that gnawed at her heart.
The stagnant waters were calm yet threatening, and a breeze created uncharacteristic ripples before she jumped.
This piece has some darker tones, which I had a lot of fun writing. Hope you guys like it 🙂
Written for Sonya’s Three Line Tales Week Fifty One
There is darkness inside all of us, that part of our soul that is irreparably damaged by the very trials and tribulations of life. We are what we are because of it, or perhaps in spite of it. Some use it as a shield to hide behind, others as an excuse to do unconscionable things. But, truly, the darkness is simply a piece of the whole, neither good nor evil unless you make it so.
PS – That ending was unexpected.
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Love this comment! How insightful and thoughtful. 🙂 What ending did you expect?
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Hmm well would have loved her seeing fight her inner demons, kiss her scars and fall in love with it. That would have served as life-affirming reminders—a lingering trace of hope.
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Maybe she was jumping in to face her fears? jumping doesnt automatically equal death 😉
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Maybe..you know that better.. you are her creator 🙂
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Haha well I think the reader has power in interpreting it however he/she wants 🙂
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Damn.. that geared up my power back to its potential. In return, I will let you share the white part of my Oreo 😝
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Haha 👍
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I thought on similar lines. There is something about the lack of colour that appeals to our darker sides.
Well written!
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Hmm interesting idea- maybe so!
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Nicely chosen words and dark around the edges. Thoughtful and with a bleak twist, just like my own offerering this week
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Thank you Lynn! Yeah, this week’s photo definitely stirs some darker stories 🙂
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Very true! 🙂
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The image that greets us hints that there might be some darkness lurking among your words – I love the ambiguity of the last line!
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Thanks! glad u enjoyed it 🙂
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A pleasure, always…
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A belíssima apresentadora e também padrão loira Ana Hickmann é um bom exemplo para provar uma supercílio arqueada muito feita. http://www.colourlovers.com/lover/valliedacom
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thank you! i’m learning spanish, so I believe I understood what you meant haha 🙂
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Beautiful writing!
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Thank you Sascha!
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she had felt confined by the hollow spaces – this line spoke of such sadness she had no other option – loved the darkness you conjured here.
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Thank you! glad u liked it 🙂
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